Copper Tales

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Wednesday, June 01, 2005

the girl in me

i want to be stranded
with you on cooney's island
to feel the silky sand touch my toes
run along the shore
scream and shout
as you follow me around
and then let you win, by just giving in.

i want to sit with you
under a coconut tree
on a shiny monday morning
when everyone's at work
and eat slices of mangoes
messi-ly.

i want to be with you
on the clouds, among the stars
we shall shine the brightest
and in the mornings
i can walk beside you safely
on a rainbow that shimmers and glimmers.


i want to dance with you
under the pouring rain
in a field
where wild strawberries grow
and there's no music
but the one playing in our mind.

14 Comments:

Blogger Natasha said...

you're in love aren't you? :D. just kidding! very beautifully written. wish i could write happy thoughts like the way you do :). ever tried composing this or something?

7:07 PM  
Blogger Sapphire said...

hahahaha,got me! not yet-but let's see,when i start some guitaring,i shall decorate it with some humming!

12:05 PM  
Blogger Natasha said...

chalo, at least i can expect something!!!! :D hehe. good luck! :)

8:55 PM  
Blogger Sadaff said...

u write sho well
**feels dumb, cant write half as good**
*waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan*


wow wow wow, me likey how u writey and get guitar, me got my sexxy one. pics coming soon.

*nods*

4:17 AM  
Blogger junaid said...

boootiful..keep them coming!

12:25 AM  
Blogger Natasha said...

sadaf don't you think we should include her in the group??? saphiya you wanna join! :D LOLz*.

1:34 PM  
Blogger Sapphire said...

natasha: I'm up for it:D Hai kya waisey ?:P

Sadaf: Thankoooo :D

Qudsia: Thank you :)

Junaid: Thank you too:)

4:05 AM  
Blogger 3rd avenue said...

you are good saphiya.... i wanna see more of this :D

errr. i just read the above and it sounds like some sleazy person making a move. so just to clarify, i am female and straight and i was referring to the writing.
:p

10:03 AM  
Blogger Sapphire said...

hahaha thank you hibzee (is it?)
I knew about the female bit ;)

1:36 AM  
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5:50 AM  
Blogger Kashmiri said...

"eat slices of mangoes, messi-ly".

Tehmat baand kay!

8:43 AM  
Blogger Ent said...

A week sounds good. I will be in Karachi.
=P

Nice poem

9:59 AM  
Blogger Zh. said...

haaaay i'm tagging yeeewwww:D:D:D.we can kick tha saif's butt to-tha-gather;)

loved it!everything on it!

8:53 AM  
Blogger Zh. said...

haaaay i'm tagging yeeewwww:D:D:D.we can kick tha saif's butt to-tha-gather;)

loved it!everything on it!

9:06 AM  

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